英语牛的高人帮下忙啊

fff789guai

我的论文摘要，帮忙看看我的翻译有哪些地方错了？非常感谢啊，自己英语真的不好，也不知道该去那里改        
             三相电能表表盖注塑模具设计

摘    要

　　本文详细地阐述了三相电能表表盖注塑模具的整个设计过程。提出了注塑模具设计的一般程序。该零件较复杂，故采用一模一腔结构，为了保证塑件的表面质量，采用三板式点浇口进料的冷流道注塑模。设计过程主要使用PRO/E进行塑件的三维造型和塑件分析。流道设计过程中使用了MPA进行塑性流动分析，确定该模具的浇口最佳位置和数量，解决了浇注系统的布局问题。整个模架设计都在PRO/E的外挂模块EMX里完成，在EMX中可以加载标准件，同时可快捷的将3D图转化为2D图，为模具设计节省了大量的时间。提高了设计效率。本文对模具制造和试模过程中可能出现的问题做了详细的分析，并提出了相应的解决方法，并对模具中的主要零件进行了结构设计、分析计算和校核，并给出了模具工作零件的工艺卡。


关键词：注塑模；浇注系统；EMX；PRO/E

Table Three-phase power design to build injection mold

Abstract

In this paper, a detailed three-phase power to build the best examples of the entire injection mold design process. Injection mold design put forward the general procedure. The more complicated parts, so the use of a mode of a cavity, in ensure the surface quality of plastic parts, a three-plate gate feed points of the cold runner injection mold. The design process using PRO / E plastic parts for the three-dimensional modeling and analysis of plastic parts. Design flow using the MPA for plastic flow analysis, to determine the best place to die and the number of gates, the gating system to solve the layout problem. The entire mold design in PRO / E plug-in module to complete EMX, EMX can be loaded in the standard parts, at the same time will be fast 3D map into a 2D map, for the mold design to save a great deal of time. Improve the efficiency of the design. In this paper, mold manufacturing and mold the course of trial problems which may arise to do a detailed analysis, and the corresponding solution, and mold parts for the major structural design, analysis, calculation and checking, and gives the mold Parts of the Process work card.

Key Words：
Injection mold; gating system; EMX; PRO / E

hxg168

In this paper，这种英文表述方式不好。最好用被动式

ygfstamp

翻译的很有问题！第一句语法就不完整呀！专业词汇也不够专业呀！gating system
a detailed three-phase power to build the best examples of the entire injection mold design process感觉不完整呀

[ 本帖最后由 ygfstamp 于 2009-5-30 22:19 编辑 ]

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bordf68houzi
现在的毕业论文的要求真多啊
我也来看看吧

laustar520

In this paper   直接去掉....

GraceHu

This paper gave us a detailed information of the entire injection mold design process for building a table three phase power lid mold and also expounded what a general injection mold design process should be. As the making of table three phase power cover parts is very complicated itself, I recommend to make it as a three plate single cavity mold by using a pin-point gate with cold runner. The main design software that I am suggest to use is PRO / E as it can provide us with a  more precise analysis for plastic part’s parting line and so on. MPA for mold flow analysis is recommended also, as it can help us on the judging of the gate position and gate quanity thus helped us solved the gate layout problem. For the mold frame design, Proe is also the best software that I am recommended, as the plug-in-module EMX can load standard parts and also it can transfer the 3D into 2D in a very quick way, which saved a lot time for the whole mold design process and improved the efficiency of the whole mold making procedure as well. This paper also gave a detail solution on the potential problems that may raise in the mold machining and mold tryout course, and provided a main mold structure design, analysis, calculation,checking together with the process work card.